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mother's off-white
eyesockets like laundry hung out to
dry. the outside

sky: blunt want and
overdue.

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loss is goldfish on hot cement
letting go is the first snow of the season

fall reminds me of the funeral and
dirt and
dirt.

she slapped you hard and shrill that
last godless evening but

right now there are acorns under her
flat gold shoes; the draw of her smile is
quick

not at all like fall and its
blown-glass halfness.

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the funeral was a slow nubby
shuttering. white

and white,
and lace. she never
did like

that kind of thing.

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letting go is when she
spins again on those flat gold
shoes. pale and young and

soft.
like everything else you're
corrosive.
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indoorfireworksxx's avatar
mother's off-white
eyesockets like laundry hung out to
dry.

This is an amazing opening stanza. I also really like the line break between outside and sky.